Wish Wish
Wish wish,
How I wish,
To be in Solitude.
Far Far,
Far away,
From these surroundings Confused.
Gone gone,
Be gone,
This Confusion.
Need need,
I need,
A Solution.
Need need,
I need,
A friend, brimming with Compassion.
Do do,
What should I do,
I feel so Restless.
Away away,
Take me away,
From this colossal Mess.
Ask ask,
All I ask,
Is for Peace.
Buzz buzz,
Goes the world,
Like busy Bees.
Where where,
Tell me where,
Is the me I Know?
Why why,
O’ why,
Do I feel so Low?
- By Nitye Sood

3 Comments:
what were the geese for???
if it was just for rhyme....idk if u shud keep it in....gees doesnt really go with "somebody get meout of thislife" ....if u know wat i mean....
just construcitve criticism ok?
byeee
m.a.
good change.
its beautiful.
youre really good u know that?
cant wait for the novels!!
byeee
m.a.
it's good . i like it . so different .
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